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My first GFX Thingy

Post by Alisae on Thu Jan 28, 2016 7:02 am

This is the very first thing I did on photoshop. Woot! Thoughts? It's for science class and yee.
Thank you @White Rose Dragon senpai.
http://i.imgur.com/bV3Yc1U.png


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Re: My first GFX Thingy

Post by Führer Lunarnox on Thu Jan 28, 2016 9:45 am

1st) How is it for science class? I want to take whatever class that is :3
2nd) Render is too sharp, so it kinda hurts the eyes imo. I would say blend the edges as well but that is hard to do with a c4d background and foreground like that.
3rd) I would have shifted the render a bit off center. It is just like the trick in photography. You want the subject of the picture to be a bit off center so that it is more appealing to the eye.

Alas, it is just my criticism. It looks great! Smile
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Re: My first GFX Thingy

Post by Alisae on Thu Jan 28, 2016 1:25 pm

OpTic MiDNiTE wrote:1st) How is it for science class? I want to take whatever class that is :3
2nd) Render is too sharp, so it kinda hurts the eyes imo. I would say blend the edges as well but that is hard to do with a c4d background and foreground like that.
3rd) I would have shifted the render a bit off center. It is just like the trick in photography. You want the subject of the picture to be a bit off center so that it is more appealing to the eye.

Alas, it is just my criticism. It looks great! Smile
You're criticism is valued criticism Wink. And it's a fun chemistry class. My school is an art school rubes. Surprisingly doing an art project is something that's somewhat normal.

Before the sharpening, I tried the blur out the not so important parts, but I guess I'll do more of that next time. And as for not centering it, I already had ideas of how I could go into it using the c4ds, because with the render it just seemed like there was a lot of potential when using it center, and that the c4ds could easily create depth. Sorta the reason why I wanted to use c4ds instead of pngs.
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Re: My first GFX Thingy

Post by Führer Lunarnox on Fri Jan 29, 2016 3:01 pm

The issue of C4D is that it limits you, which is why I rarely/never use it. I dont even use stock unless I absolutely have to mearly because I feel its better to put the time in to make a background.
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Re: My first GFX Thingy

Post by Asgore Dreemurr on Sun Jan 31, 2016 1:54 am

Looks amazing - but the border seems a little bland. I don't like the black bars. Also, why not show the chemical symbol for Ununtrium?. The rest that Rubes stated is perfect. I am also jealous of your school.
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Re: My first GFX Thingy

Post by Alisae on Sun Jan 31, 2016 2:01 am

Ulti-Apelio wrote:Looks amazing - but the border seems a little bland. I don't like the black bars. Also, why not show the chemical symbol for Ununtrium?. The rest that Rubes stated is perfect. I am also jealous of your school.
Cause it wouldn't look good.
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