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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:54 pm

If you haven't yet, go here to read the details you will need. Fill out the character templates below. I (or a DM) will check them and approve/disapprove of them. We will PM you if your character is denied, and why, and how to fix it. For now, Sign-Ups will remain open!

CHARACTER SUBMISSION DEADLINE IS SEPTEMBER 1ST!

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Post by Tamashii Fri Aug 12, 2016 2:22 am

Character Sheet:

Physical Attack:

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Special Attack:

Special Defense:


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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Fri Aug 12, 2016 5:48 pm

@Tamashii Your character is very interesting. Approved.
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Post by soul kitten Fri Aug 12, 2016 11:21 pm

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sat Aug 13, 2016 12:21 am

Denied. You aren't using the points correctly. When you measure power in a category of two skills, you distribute the power in points.

Like this:
Physical attack A:
Power: 30

Physical attack B:
Power: 70

They add up to 100, which is what is required. You aren't utilizing all of your points. Each category needs to add to 100, as stated before.

Also, you don't have two abilities per category; that is required. Add 1 more special attack and 1 more special defense. Remember to utilize all your points!


Fix that, and I shall approve. Just post here letting me know when you finish.
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sat Aug 13, 2016 1:21 am

Still not accepted! Your special attack points exceed the limit.
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Post by Sentinelle Sat Aug 13, 2016 1:45 am

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sat Aug 13, 2016 12:39 pm

@Soul Kitten Approved!
@Voltage Cutlass Diana Approved! Interesting. She seems to require a lot of thought when using her.
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Post by Firebreath Sun Aug 14, 2016 3:22 am

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sun Aug 14, 2016 10:17 pm

@Firebreathe

Take off the ultimate attack. Also, edit your powers to not say "anything", because anything with power exceeding your defense/attack will overwhelm it.
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sun Aug 14, 2016 11:48 pm

@Firebreath Approved this character. Have fun.
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Post by Oshu Wed Aug 17, 2016 2:56 am

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:04 pm

Denied. You can only have ONE weapon, which is your gauntlets. Rework your entire sheet.
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sat Aug 27, 2016 5:16 pm

@Tamashii Reapproved this editted character.
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Post by necruta Sun Aug 28, 2016 9:17 pm

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Tue Aug 30, 2016 12:45 pm

@necruta I want to approve this purely because of the Spongebob reference. Nevertheless, still approved! Interesting characters we're getting.
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Post by Videns Tue Aug 30, 2016 4:57 pm

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Tue Aug 30, 2016 5:11 pm

@videns Rework the sheet just a little. It needs to be more specific, especially Persistent Breeze. Some attacks might prove that false. Also, Dust does not seem like anything used for defense at all. Summit Gust is impossible to be invisible, since it cuts through the air and makes anything around it get cut. Such as slashing as it crosses over dirt, you can see the outline, but it's fine. Just rework those a little and it will be approved.
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Post by Valkoor Wed Aug 31, 2016 12:08 am

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Post by Videns Wed Aug 31, 2016 5:30 pm

Fixed with the things. Hope it makes more sense now Very Happy
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Wed Aug 31, 2016 6:32 pm

Your invisible thing can be invisible if it hits nothing but air but it's fine! Approved. @Videns
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Wed Aug 31, 2016 6:35 pm

HE WILL BE YOUR GUIDE. MY CHARACTER WILL BE POSTED SOON. I WILL PLAY AS BOTH.

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Post by Lunarnox Fri Sep 02, 2016 1:30 am

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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Fri Sep 02, 2016 1:34 am

@Führer Lunarnox This character has been approved.
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Post by Asgore Dreemurr Sat Sep 03, 2016 5:10 pm

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